AT GOD’S DOOR.
The Sun scorches my body,
I shield my eyes with my hand,
Flicking away the black ants,
Which crawl over me uninvited.
The tattered cloth barely covers my nakedness,
I writhe and lie in pain,
The Gods I have resigned to,
Lying in front of His sacred precinct.
A shadow falls over me,
There’s a respite for a while,
I open my eyes to see a towering figure,
Back towards me in black,
Maybe my time has come along,
Was that the God of Death I see?
Was I to be finally relieved,
Of the life of pain and suffering?
I hear the clanging of coins,
Was that a Messiah instead giving me money?
I crane my neck to look beside me,
But there’s no sign of the silver metal.
The striking pain in my neck is back,
Where I hurt myself from that wretched, jagged piece of rock,
I put my head on the ground again,
That figure in black still present.
Alas! The Sun is back on me,
That was a mere mortal,
Pursuing God for problems of his own,
While my life continues to take the life out of me.
Almost every day, I see a poor, old man lying right in front of a religious place (which I refuse to mention because of it’s complete irrelevance) and many people like me pass him by with our own problems raging in our heads. I’m not proud of it. At all.
Perfect!
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Thank you. Lovely to see you here!
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Very powerful… The last stanza really stands out! ⭐
Have a great day ahead! Aquileana 😀
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Thank you, dear! Tenga un buen día!
P.S.: Is that correct? 😛
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It is … You too AdiC!
Best wishes. Aquileana 😀
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Nicely written adic,I just saw some video from one of followers, that video somehow relative to this poem. Keep it up
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Thank you…
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oh yes the humane in humanity is missing for sure in the world
and what a perfect poem..
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Thank you… I’m happy that I’ve written something worth appreciation but sad that there arose the situation where we have to write about such things …
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Hey there. Long time. How are you and how’s everything going on? You may or may not remember me as “ISpontein” or “Wise-N-Impulsive”. 😀
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Hi! Of course I remember. I’m good! How’re you doing? Why the change?
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I’ll write a post about it and ping you. I was on a break from blogging and am back now with some ideas.
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Oh wow! That’s nice! 🙂
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As usual, nailed it. Mesmerizing is the word. 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂
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Ahh.. the pressing problem of lack of humanity in humans. Wonderful. 🙂
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Thank you… It’s heartbreaking being so helpless…
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Agreed. But well, the least we can do is not loose our own humanity!
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True enough!
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So…what will you do about that person?
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I wish I had done something. You need to read this :
https://inkingthethinking.wordpress.com/2015/05/24/at-gods-door-no-more/
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Will do!
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Oh – in fact I have read it already!
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So, unfortunately, I didn’t do anything 😐
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Time to learn from that then and not lose the opportunity next time?
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I think so! 🙂 Thank you for bothering. 🙂
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