On special request by Izza from the ‘A touch of my saint’, the previous post has been now re-written with a completely different end.
Glistening smile in her eyes,
She felt her beau cupping her face,
Caressing her hair and her cheek,
His finger lingering at her lips.
With the soft touch of his lips on hers,
Cheers erupted and flowers fell upon them,
The bride was kissed,
Before the priest could even say so.
Graciously Yours!
P.S. Like that, Izza? 😉
Picture credits : Pinterest.
Hey Tinytot,
It’s so fresh.:) I love the way it has ended.:D.
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Thank you so much, Upen! I loved penning it down too. Brings an ‘instant two minute smile’ on your face. Yes, #IMissMaggi. :p
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Naah! A instant three minute smile;)
# Popcorn
Do you like that extra minute smile:D
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Yes, I like it. But I miss Maggi! And now we have #MaggiMissesYouToo! 😀
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Tiny tot is a tough nut:P. Yeh maggi maggi kya hey:D
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Come December, we’ll all hopefully know again ki yeh Maggi kya hai! 😉
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December?. Hope so:P. Then your hash tag changes to # My maggi is back. :D.
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Exactly! Can’t wait 😉
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Hell yess :p
It was perfect…
Thanks a bunch 😍
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I am so glad! 😀
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I was glad top..thanks aditi 🙂
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The idea was yours 😉
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So Izza excavated love from the dangerous mind of yours. Hard to say who did a better job. But the result was beautiful: D
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Thank you so much! Oh and my mind isn’t really as dangerous as you make it sound. 😉
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Loved it! 😀
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Thank you so much, Soumya! 🙂
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You are very welcome, Aditi! 🙂
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Beautiful!
Lovelorn Poetry
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Thank you so much! And welcome to the blog 🙂
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Superb! You’re actually continuing your trend of changing one or some words and changing the whole meaning of the post 😉 Glad that Izza helped and glad you came up with a happy ending post 🙂 Let more come please 😛
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Haha! I am glad someone noticed the trend 😉 I’ll keep trying. Thank you so much 🙂
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You’re welcome! Keep writing & inspiring 😉
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Happy happy one.. Lovely. . The guy was in a hurry :)…
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Yes! So hurried 😉
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