As her hand moved across the sheet,
She created the man she always wanted,
Putting her dreams on paper for all,
She wanted the world to worship him.
She gave him deep dark eyes,
A mane of hair enviable even by women,
A nose as straight as a string,
A smile to floor with just one look.
In his hand, she gave him a knife,
The dripping blood adding menace to him,
“It’s time to get back to your cell,”
The nurse said taking her art away.
Graciously Yours!
Freak! This one froze me for a second :-O superb!
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Hello! Welcome to the blog (with this shocker!) ๐
Thank you for loving it ๐
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Haha!
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Nice twist!
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Thanks, Kunal ๐
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Wow. Very well written Aditi.. ๐
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Thank you, Jackie! Glad you approve ๐
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Fantasy and imagination flowing through her creation… the last line is superb!
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Thank you so much! ๐ Their imaginations and fantasies creep us out, but if someone who’s not institutionalized comes up with such a fantasy, we call it art… Ironical, no?
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Oh, yes..for some it might be creepy…but I like to appreciate the creation first, the creator comes after…. ๐
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You are indeed blessed to be able to think this way then! ๐
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Gripping and awesome ending ๐ With these kind of posts, I will definitely visit the archives ๐
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Haha! I look forward to it then ๐
And thank you ๐
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Loved it. Short & crisp. Says so much but still leaves so much more to imagination. something that leaves you thinking.
Keep it up.
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Thank you so much, Isra! The brain works in fascinating ways…
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This was awesome ! The end was a brilliant twist
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Thank you so much! Glad you liked it ๐
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