Your eyes. Your eyes always saw the good in me. Your eyes reminded me of how much I should love myself. Your eyes were not scared to see my darkness. Your eyes took me in from bottom to top, within to without. Your eyes wanted to know me to the core, not just the crust.
Your eyes smiled each time I did. Your eyes scanned the crowd to catch just a glimpse of me. Your eyes didn’t waste a moment, not admiring me. Your eyes made me blush.
The fire destroyed it all! Your eyes were the last thing I saw before losing consciousness. Your eyes were also the first thing I saw after gaining consciousness.
That day it was to be either both of us or none. But you went away leaving me alone in this big, wide world. Or so I thought. Your eyes are now mine. And they still make me blush.
Graciously Yours!
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Thank you so much for the re-blog! 🙂
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Aditi !!! It was so cute ..
I loveeed it
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Izza!!! Thank you! Your excitement is so evident and infectious! I’m so glad the love touched you! 🙂
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Yaa it just touched me alot 🙂
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ohh that such an interesting twist!At the end I was like “what just happened”? beautifully penned Aditi:)
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Haha! Shocked you, huh? 😉 Thanks for visiting! 🙂
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Oh it did:) lovely write up:)enjoyed:)
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Thank you so much! All a writer asks for is appreciation 🙂
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bingo:)
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cute one aditi:))
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Thanks a lot, Upen! 🙂
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Oh my god! It took me a moment to figure out what you meant. And only then did I realise the true capabilities of your writing!
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Oh my God! That’s a huge compliment! Thank you, Miss B 😉
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I am charmed ❤
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Am I glad or what? ❤
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