You looked, you smiled,
You strode, I sighed.
The twinkle in your eyes,
The kindness in your soul,
No matter what others say,
I would give myself up for you – as a whole.
A glance, a nod,
The swag, I thought,
Could never go unnoticed,
‘Twas so sexy and hot.
You charmed, I eyed,
You knew, I smiled.
Graciously Yours!
P.S.: Reading this again, got my heart thudding! For none, in particular 😉
Inking The Thinking. 
Beautiful poem Adi! Like a Strawberry shortcake. Small and sweet.
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Thanks a ton 🙂
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oooooooooohhhhhh romantic that one ..
thud thud thud thud thud … 🙂
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Oh yeah! I felt that too 😉
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WOWIE!!!!!!!!!!!! It’s beautiful, like truly magically beautiful !!
Loved it
-Purrfectgirl
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Thank you so much, dear! 🙂
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Ah, I hope you find yourself a young man as romantic as you one day 😉
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Thank you! I hope I do 😉 Not cheesy yet romantic enough to make life feel like a blessing each day. 🙂
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Yeah. They’re not easy to find though…
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Well, maybe that someone will come across my blog one fine day and voila! It’ll all change for the both of us…:P
Okay, enough of wishful thinking 😉
I know they aren’t easy to find… But I know of someone like that, whom I address as my brother! Can you believe my luck?!
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Wonderful! As long as he’s interested in you too 🙂
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Ahh! There lies the problem! I didn’t know he was so good, or else I would never have addressed him as “brother” in the first place… But some things which shouldn’t happen, just happen! But I know his girl will be really lucky 😉
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Ah well you are allowed to un’friend-zone’ him you know! 😉
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You know THAT is a brilliant piece of advice 😉
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Aah would have really regretted not reading this piece ! 😉
This was written quite passionately it seems. Loved it ! You charmed, I eyed; You knew I smiled. Says so much without saying much. A real masterpiece it is 🙂 🙂
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You’re back! The blog missed you. Since you say passionately, I really don’t know whom it was directed to 😛 But when I was done with it, it took my breath away! Hence, the name!
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It did that to your readers too !! So I would say, let them decide to whom it was directed. That’ll help them to live in a Paradise, though a false one 😀
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Any paradise, even a fool’s, is a blessing in today’s world! So, I’ll give you this… 🙂
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And I will gladly accept it with my both hands ^_^
Thank you !! And I am in lab now, so can easily go through your other posts as well. So yes, I am back to your blog 😀
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Haha! Okay. I’ll wait for your reactions! Just don’t get into trouble! 😉
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I have the gracious Kohinoor ! Troubles won’t be able to trouble me 😉
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That complement will be unmatched for quite a while! 😉
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Then I feel very lucky to be the one who gave it ! ^_^
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And I’m lucky to be getting it 😉
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This was just amazing!! No wonder this is your personal-favorite post.
-Naima
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Thank you, Naima! 🙂
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