Taking the breath away!


You looked, you smiled,

You strode, I sighed.

The twinkle in your eyes,

The kindness in your soul,

No matter what others say,

I would give myself up for you – as a whole.

A glance, a nod,

The swag, I thought,

Could never go unnoticed,

‘Twas so sexy and hot.

You charmed, I eyed,

You knew, I smiled.


Graciously Yours!

P.S.: Reading this again, got my heart thudding! For none, in particular πŸ˜‰


27 thoughts on “Taking the breath away!”

      1. Well, maybe that someone will come across my blog one fine day and voila! It’ll all change for the both of us…:P

        Okay, enough of wishful thinking πŸ˜‰

        I know they aren’t easy to find… But I know of someone like that, whom I address as my brother! Can you believe my luck?!


      2. Ahh! There lies the problem! I didn’t know he was so good, or else I would never have addressed him as “brother” in the first place… But some things which shouldn’t happen, just happen! But I know his girl will be really lucky πŸ˜‰


  1. Aah would have really regretted not reading this piece ! πŸ˜‰
    This was written quite passionately it seems. Loved it ! You charmed, I eyed; You knew I smiled. Says so much without saying much. A real masterpiece it is πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

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    1. You’re back! The blog missed you. Since you say passionately, I really don’t know whom it was directed to πŸ˜› But when I was done with it, it took my breath away! Hence, the name!

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